Hi Teryn my name is Ethan from yms I like the bit were his Dad comes to give him the cake but I don't like the bit were he calls himself a freak sadly. But next time maybe you could make it a bit bigger and show the picture of the description and spell here right.
Kia ora, I,m Max from Yaldhurst Mopdel School. I enjoyed the part when when the dad gave him a cake. Did you think abotu why it was so shrot? Next tiemyou could ad in a few more sentences. Why did noone like him. Goodbe, from Max.
hi i like that you did this and its very cool and scary.
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ReplyDeleteHi Teryn my name is Ethan from yms I like the bit were his Dad comes to give him the cake but I don't like the bit were he calls himself a freak sadly. But next time maybe you could make it a bit bigger and show the picture of the description and spell here right.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, I,m Max from Yaldhurst Mopdel School. I enjoyed the part when when the dad gave him a cake. Did you think abotu why it was so shrot? Next tiemyou could ad in a few more sentences. Why did noone like him. Goodbe, from Max.
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